For this activity we were challenged to make an “I am Poem” we created our own poem of a sea creature. This activity was realy fun to do because I could think of some things ot put in to my poem and the first time writing a poem of a sea creature. I used Word Hippo to find words that sound better and are used more then the regular words I say.
I chose an alligator, Writing: I am Feared. I hear the ocean. I see humans. I want to eat anything in my way. I am the terror of the sea. I feel no one can conquer me I wrestle with the water aggressively. I cry when i am injured. I am the monster of the seas. I say and roar as i am attacked. I dream that i am the strongest creature. I hope that i will be fed eating off fish. I am the ferocious alligator.
Kia ora Kane,
It’s Charlotte again, a blog commenter for the Summer Learning Journey. What a fantastic blog post! I can tell that you have put lots of work into this – well done.
What a lovely poem. I like how you have captured the shark’s feelings and almost made the reader feel the same emotions. Your poem is very good, have you written a poem before? My favourite type of poem is a Haiku. Have you heard or written a haiku poem before?
What is your favourite subject at school, based off of this poem I would guess that you enjoy writing! My favourite subject was art and music because I like being creative!
Ngā Mihi Nui
Charlotte Visser
Summer Learning Journey